Bound To - The General By Selina Storm
A list of things he has sacrificed, including personal feelings.
It creates a "ticking clock" feeling as the protagonist uncovers hidden agendas.
Side-bar notes showing the General's true intentions for a mission. Bound to the General by Selina Storm
In Bound to the General , the tension hinges on the power imbalance and the high stakes of a military or dystopian setting. A feature that would deepen the reader's immersion and the characters' connection is 🖋️ The Feature: The General’s Ledger
A visual or narrative tally of what the protagonist "owes" the General. 🛡️ Why It Works A list of things he has sacrificed, including
If you tell me more about the specific or the protagonist's personality , I can tailor the ledger entries to fit your story’s tone.
Start each chapter with a brief, cold military log entry. In Bound to the General , the tension
The shifting tone of the ledger entries tracks his growing obsession. 🚀 How to Implement It
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